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the video there was a man who doing a campaign about free hugs, the Man was a
man with brown medium hair and quite good-looking, he stood in the middle of
the street while holding a sign about offering free hugs. At first, some people
tried to keep the distance from the man while the others toying with him, they
react as if he is a freak who tried to do a sexual harassment, but then an
elderly woman asked the man to give her a hug, The man gladly accept and gave
her a hug, the police prohibited the free hugs campaign, they tried to stop the
man and his colleagues, but then after hearing the explanation they allow it,
then the man and his colleagues stood up and explain the purpose of the event, after
that they continued their free hugs campaign and they got 10 thousand signatures. In the end, they got 10 thousand signatures and
many people performed the free hugs, even the police accept it when someone
tried to give him a hug, the main point of the video from my point of view is
about how people giving and accepting kindness from each others, how we unite
and cast away the lonely feeling in out heart, togetherness and equality for
the better society and future
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ReplyDeleteYour posting is good, that gives some life values which is very valuable for our life as human but there are still mistakes that you should fix to make your posting more perfect. The first is about your topic sentence “In the video there was a man who doing a campaign about free hugs” it would be nicer if you change that sentence because this is little bit odd if you use this sentence as topic sentence. May be that because the words “ in this video” it would be nicer if you don’t use that words because that words make the sentences not flexible. Second is about sentences” the Man was a man with…..” and “At first, some people tried to keep…” When I read that sentences, I felt there was something odd because both of those sentences aren’t connected. In my opinion between of that sentences must be added by sentence that can connect those sentences. The third is about this sentence “At first, some people tried to keep……. they got 10 thousand signatures” in that sentence you put comma too much. You should not do that and fix it and you must place the punctuation correctly. And the mistake is about sentence” In the end, they got 10….. lonely feeling in out heart….” The word “out” is not suitable. it should be replaced by word “ our”. That is all that you should fix. Thank you….
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