Outline of FBS's Lobby

Topic sentence :
The FBS’s lobby is always full of activities which makes it very crowded

Major sentence(s) :

-          It’s so Crowded because of the students activities and the administrative business of the campus itself

Minor sentence(s)

-          - Many students use the Lobby as place to do their assignments and sometimes they disturb the other people on the spot

-          - They use the Lobby’s Wi-Fi connections  to find entertainments or to do their assignments 

-          - It’s common to see the students playing games or watching movies and  they also laughs and yells loudly to the extent that they disturb the other people
 - Many students formed groups while recharging their gadgets or when they doing their assignments but they pay no attention about their surroundings so the wires are everywhere

Major sentence
Students who doing their assignments prefer to sit on the floor because of limited number of seats available 

Minor sentence(s)

-          Some people use the lobby as a spot to have snacks and they don’t throw away their rubbish in the rubbish bin

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-          Many students just throw their rubbish or leaving many things behind so it makes the Dean, the lecturers and the staff angry

-          The FBS’s lobby has a limited number of seats so when there are so many people who doing their activities at the lobby, some people just sitting on the floor and it disturbs the other people who want to pass by.

Concluding sentence(s)

In short, the FBS’s Lobby is always crowded because there are so many activities take place there, it’s usually used by the students to do their assignments  and to do another various things, but because of our own actions the lobby turn into a messy place where rubbish scattered up over here and there. It makes us feel uncomfortable and makes the Dean, the lecturers and other staffs angry. We need to pay more respect to our facility so we will not get any problem when we used it, we need to be more careful about our actions so that people will feel more comfortable when they entered the lobby.  After all, the FBS’s Lobby is ours. So  it’s our duty and responsibilities to take care of it.

Presented by Class 3 B

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